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MY SILLY VALENTINE

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MY SILLY VALENTINE

MY SILLY VALENTINE

love
two struck
he timid
she so demure
chocolates proffered
reluctant   acceptance
all about waistline worries
“fat or thin i’ll love you as much”
says he  going down on one knobby knee
“oh  tee  hee”  says she    stuffing greedily

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  1. Date: 2/17/2012 5:51:00 PM
    got me laughing Daver.... reality strikes and those last couple lines make it for me. love Bob

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Sweet man he is.... "fat or thin"it does not matter, love anyway!(I am I chocolate lover)Happy Valentines Day!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

    austin Avatar daver austin
    Date: 2/11/2012 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YES! Hershey P.A. FOREVER! LOve, daver
  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Cute etheree, these are tough to write. You have a fine one here.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:50:00 PM
    Such a cute poem Daver, enjoyed it, love,vie

    austin Avatar daver austin
    Date: 2/11/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my stuff, vienna, and just in time - I may die for love of chocolate. Love, daver
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:08:00 PM
    hahaha. I love her little tee hee hee as she stuffed her face. Personally, when my husband tells me he will like me thin or not, it makes no difference to me. For me, it's MYSELF that I don't want to let down and I am always trying to control my urges for food!! a life long battle. Good topic for this chocolate time of year, my friend.

    austin Avatar daver austin
    Date: 2/11/2012 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They shall probably find me, wrappings of a huge Hershey bar at my feet and wonderful milk chocolate juice on my lips. No I'm not dead, just gone to some heavely sphere. Love, daver