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Ode to La Ba

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Ode to La Ba

Your cold metallic grip is strong in my hand I lift my head to kiss you and take a deep breath Your lips are firm and yet caress mine I send wind through your mouth Your smooth, sharp, song Strikes a chord In my soul. All other Sounds Subside I wish to hold your lips to mine eternally Yes Enveloped in this shrill, sweet, serenity. Yes But I have promises to keep and family Who Would Like Some Sleep
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  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:56:00 PM
    This is a wonderful ode to a trumpet(hope I guessed right) I am so glad it came out right! I love how you make the trumpet out to be a lover. lol Nicely written Love Jane

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    Date: 2/12/2012 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Yes, it is a trumpet. :D
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:37:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ashlynne. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol