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Spring Sleep

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Spring Sleep

Sighing softly, a gentle breeze, dances amid my clothes line. Sweet the scent, refreshing tease, as sheets, its hug entwines. This night, on Spring, I shall recline.
2/8/12 For the contest: English Quintain, A Spring Day Sponsored by Francine Roberts

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  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Such a happy scene :) a great piece paula

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:53:00 PM

    Paula, this poem reminds me of the days my Mom used to hang out the wash, you described it perfectly, best of luck in Francine`s constest and I want to thank you for my placement in your Allure contest, I am thrilled.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Oh, I really love this delightful spring poem Paula! You have captured the freshness of spring with your words. This has winner written all over it. (smile) I want to thank you very much for my placement in your Lure contest. You made my day. Blessings, Connie This poem is going into my fav's.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 3:09:00 PM

    Oh, I love it! I'm happy to see someone else appreciates the sight and smell...and the nostalgia of hanging freshly washed clothes out in the breeze to dry! (I still do, when the weather allows!) Ps...many many thanks Paula, for my recent placement in your "Allure" contest!! So pleased!!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:20:00 PM

    i can picture and smell this. nice rhyming.

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:57:00 PM

    Superb, I want to hear it with some music.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 2:28:00 PM

    ......the spring is comming....and I love it. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 8:31:00 PM

    not much work going on here.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Oh this makes me so happy, i want this so badly. Good luck in the contest! :) Taylor

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Ah! Those fresh sheets that are clothesline dried..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 9:20:00 AM

    this is gorgeous, Paula and I think that is why Francine is drawn to this form. It just rings with melody. Good luck in the spring contest and thanks for my win in the tampled contest.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 12:39:00 PM

    What a wonderful way to go to sleep...on Spring...I really love your poem!

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:50:00 AM

    I truly enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry today . I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Sweet and lovely poem....touching Paula.Thank you for sharing it with me. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Evokes my senses...nothing like sleeping on sheets dried on the clothes line !! A refreshing poem !!