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Two Different Worlds

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Two Different Worlds

One face with two different smiles 
One floor with two different tiles 
One pen with two different inks 
One eye with two different blinks 
One child with different parents 
One sea with two different currents 
One smile for two different reasons 
One sun for two different seasons 
One mind with two different thoughts 
One crime judged in two different courts 
One husband with two different wives 
One man with two different lives 
One soul with two different friends 
One beginning with two different ends
One mouth but two different words
One person in two different worlds 

by Ndile

submitted October 7th, 2009 at 2:58am

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 2:55:00 AM

    Perfectly done Sandile, I add this poem to my faves, good job! - Alisher

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 8/22/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Alisher
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:04:00 AM

    I love your one is to two life hypocrasy.

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 6/10/2013 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx man
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:46:00 AM

    This I like. Sounds like an internal battle of good v bad. Feel like I have been there in the past. God bless. Dave.

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 6/12/2012 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Dave a battle in which good will prevail.I'm glad it touched you, God bless you too.
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 6:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sandile. Love, Carol

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 6/12/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm very honoured to have my poem featured this week, thank you for comment!
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem, It is well-written and I enjoyed reading it.

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 6/12/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Shirley,I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:28:00 AM

    Like the way you did this poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 6/12/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne
  1. Date: 2/9/2012 4:51:00 PM

    Dear Sadile, Thank you for your kind comment re my poem. I thoroughly enjoyed your Two Different Worlds - an interesting write! God bless, Maureen

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 2/10/2012 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're welcome, it'sjust that I really enjoyed enjoyed your poem. Im glad you enjoyed my poem too
  1. Date: 2/9/2012 3:52:00 AM

    THIS is an awesome write, I must admit! Welcome to PoetrySoup, mate! Keep inspiring! =)

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 2/9/2012 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Glenn, your comment really means a lot to me.
  1. Date: 2/8/2012 5:46:00 AM

    Again a nice write. Sometimes it feels like we do live in two different worlds. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Msane Avatar Sandile Msane Date: 2/10/2012 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla, Im glad you enjoyed it