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My love

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My love

My love, my life. Like wine, we age. Our love, grows strong. I write, this poem. To death, we part. M.Mahauariki © 2012

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  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:49:00 PM

    Murry, these are lovely as lines of a Valentine. If you want to win the contest, you will need to make each one rhyme: such as "Like wine, it's fine" something like that. Good luck! andrea

    Mahauariki Avatar Murray Mahauariki Date: 2/8/2012 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for pointing that out. This is a new form for me... Muzz
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Interesting work..Sara