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Honeymoon Serenade

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Honeymoon Serenade

Just as the moon rises each night and even as snow is caressed by its light, then glowing, I'll rise, becoming your dawn, your curved sleeping form to smile upon. With eyes like bright stars, I then will embrace the landscape of you, each small line on your face. And surely you’ll mirror my worshiping glow, for I am your moon and you are my snow. I’ll keep shining down with each breath you take. May I blaze in your dreams before you awake. And barely I’ll whisper, “Keep sleeping, my dear.” Your faithful beloved, I’ll always be here.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Andrea great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Andrea nothing as peaceful as sleeping where you are loved....this is beautiful...congratulations...

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Congratulations Petal, You know this contest only asked for good poems only, not great ones haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Andy loved it first time round too xx

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 11:18:00 PM
    This a super lovely stellar poem my dear friend Andrea. I'm so in-love & my heart was singing while reading this stellar write of yours. My huge hearty congratulations on your super win! My Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for sharing-to my fave. Thanks a million for your precious time stopping by. Sorry if my expression of gratitude comes only now. 'Got hectic schedule & the other day, after school I'd a bike accident ;)). Got bruises but I'm fine now;)) Thanks a lot again. love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:17:00 PM
    nice going Andrea, congrats....SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:34:00 PM
    the romance of this is so beautiful well done on winning Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Hmmm. It sounds as if you're on a perpetual honeymoon. Great poetry, my friend. Congratulations on a well-deserved first placement. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Great work, dearest. I've grown used to seeing your name at the top of the judges list.. I rejoice with you.... Jake

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea! Another beautiful poem......there seems to be no end to your beautiful words! Lovely work !!!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on a great win. G.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:07:00 AM
    lovely poem Andrea....congrats on a great win

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 2:12:00 AM
    ANDREA...ANDREA...ANDREA??? Such a poetic heart you have...Not a hitch, not a misplaced word, not anything to mar the absolutely beauty of this write! FAVORITE!!!! Oh dear! I'm flying....7...Fave...and congrats on the NUMBER ONE WIN!

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    Date: 8/9/2013 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Eileen, I really appreciate what you said to me here. I've been accused of not having a poet's "heart" because I care so much about the structure of every line(putting craft over feeling). Everyone writes differently and trying to be precise in my wording is important to me. Thanks again.
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:33:00 PM
    Another big win! You are amazing. I love the romantic quality of this poem. Very beautiful... Congratulations... Jack

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:59:00 PM
    Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome good poem' in Nathan's contest... always LINDA

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Great Job here Andrea, this is a wonderful poem a well deserved first place finish! Very Good! MC

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:07:00 PM
    awesome..Nate

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:20:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:29:00 AM
    Wow Andrea I am with you here this is stunning!!! I don't know how I missed it unless it got pushed off the board by one of those that post 30 in a day , today being an example if you look at the new posts. xx

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