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Honeymoon Serenade Repost

Just as the moon rises each night and even as snow is caressed by its light, then glowing, I'll rise, becoming your dawn, your curved sleeping form to smile upon. With eyes like bright stars, I then will embrace the landscape of you, each small line on your face. And surely you’ll mirror my worshiping glow, for I am your moon and you are my snow. I’ll keep shining down with each breath you take. May I blaze in your dreams before you awake. And barely I’ll whisper, “Keep sleeping, my dear.” Your faithful beloved, I’ll always be here. For the Contest of Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver: Wow ~ What a gem... Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:20:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:29:00 AM

    Wow Andrea I am with you here this is stunning!!! I don't know how I missed it unless it got pushed off the board by one of those that post 30 in a day , today being an example if you look at the new posts. xx

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:09:00 PM

    "I then will embrace the landscape of you," actually the whole 8 lines are super. How do you so consistently do it? Luck in the contest - actually you don't need luck with this one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 10:59:00 AM

    Marvelous piece! So romantic. I enjoyed very much. :D ~Laura

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 7:20:00 AM

    This is very beautiful! I don't know how this didn't place. did you forget to enter it? It's so romantic and dreamy... :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Beautiful romantic piece, Andrea - just love the lines 'for I am your moon and you are my snow.'

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Oh Woww...this is just dreamy and romantic and just Wow! I honestly Love this one! I am so glad you re-posted this, this just made me smile and give that sigh...love this one, Andrea! Will be faving this! ^_^! hugs to you!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:59:00 PM

    Just a very beautiful poem Mrs. Andrea, invoking a lot of emotion, this is what I think of when I think of true love and faithfulness. Best of luck in the contest! This to me, is a winner!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:04:00 PM

    thankxx for vote of confidence Andrea on my Footles entry.. u are so great at them cannot wait to read yours luv..

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Who could want more from a partner than for her or him to love you while you sleep , best of luck in the contest Andrea , Hugs and best wishes Declan xx

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:17:00 PM

    Hi Andrea,nice to see you`re on leave again,lol:) This is such a pleasure to read my friend,its truly a gem.You`ll be on top of that contest,I just know it.Huggss to ya`,Arild

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Indiglow sunrise on meadows of wheat. Brings passionate kisses for valintines sweet. The air crisp with honey and two loves retreat. Where two becomes one, now equals four feet.

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:41:00 PM

    It hits me in that soft spot Andrea. A beautiful write to say the least. It creeps into the mind and takes over!!! Luv, LIzzie

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:06:00 PM

    This is a beautiful piece Andrea!!! I have been away from soup a bit but Im back and catching up love.... luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:52:00 AM

    what a pleasure and treasure to read this piece Andrea.. it truly is a gem.. good luck in new contest.. stunning imagery and rhyme flow luv..

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:05:00 AM

    wooooooooooooooow.......... this is one of my favourites ever of yours that i read..So romantic .. very... tmfs :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 4:56:00 AM

    Wow this is some romance- beautifully drawn dear poetess, all the very best, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:41:00 AM

    Andrea ,your a true gem sparkling and bestowing us all with your brilliance and warmth,so good to hear from you ,i been caught up with the house too but i rushed in to see you,thanks for writing in,take care my sunshine!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 2:27:00 AM

    Good luck in Tracie's Contest - Well written poem. Thanks for your kind comment. I want to go to Israel. Have been to China, but not Israel. I guess it has changed a lot since 1974. Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:05:00 AM

    sparkling down to the last line, andie.. my winning bet! subdued yet brightly lit!...how have you been?:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 11:20:00 PM

    This is really a gem of a poem.I remember it.Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:49:00 PM

    I like this, and I'm sure Tracie will like it as well.