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Strange Places


                                  When I rolled over with you,
                                     I gazed at blankets
                                            hung over dirty windows,
                                   The ceiling,
                                          with designs from
                                       JC Penney Co.
           
                                      And then,
                                            there you are.
                                      Smiling, 
                                            touching,
                                         knowing that with you.
                                      We can make this place
                                         the Hilton.
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  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:53:00 AM

    TUCKER,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:09:00 PM

    From small beginnings. Nicely written. Congratulations Tucker

    Carwile Jr Avatar Tucker Carwile Jr Date: 2/12/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, but it seems strange to get congrats on something you love to do
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon