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The Girl with the Constellations

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The Girl with the Constellations



She was the one who had constellations on her face—
Yes her face, and not her eyes,
for her eyes were an entirely different universe

I kissed each and every one of those stars…
and when I did,
the heavens came to me






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  1. Date: 2/26/2012 8:33:00 PM

    This is a beautifully written poem, Nikko! Congrats on winning!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:34:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Nikko! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:15:00 PM

    Congratulations Nikko on a great write and a terrific win. Jon

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:22:00 AM

    This is a beauty Missy and I see congratulations are in order as well.. No surprise there ;) hope your Tuesday has been a good one *mwahugs* to you !

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Nikko, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:53:00 PM

    Congrats. Nikko on your super-duper win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 5:33:00 PM

    wow, I am so glad to finally be seeing this. Loaded with creative imagery, my friend. LOVE it, and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 4:24:00 PM

    You can do magic with simplicity..KISS You do it well. Congrats

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:57:00 PM

    congrats Nikko on a sensational second place win for these creative line sweet friend..luv..

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 11:40:00 AM

    Nikko congrats on your great win..David

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Very nice Nikko. Congratulations

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win nikko, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:33:00 AM

    very sensual poem in such a few lines! magical :) congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 6:04:00 AM

    Beautiful write and a well deserved win. Thanks for sharing it....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 3:46:00 AM

    Nice one nikko that glass didn't do much for me, will try something stronger. Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:10:00 PM

    This is a cool lil' free verse, nikko. Wonder wot prompted this one? I can't recall ever having had someone describe constellations being on someone's face....except for face paint? "for her eyes were an entirely different universe" - great line there, to go with the overall theme. Weird, but this poem was unexpected - out of left field.

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 1:08:00 AM

    Lovely poem by you Nikko.I love the metaphors here.AnD THANKS for telling me about that typo.

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 11:56:00 PM

    A beautiful expression of love! Blessings, Rhonda