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Threads

Ripped out love.
Not nearly enough
Threads hanging left,
To connect.
Too many tears wept.
To repair me now,
Yank the rest out;
No evidence allowed.
Pull the straggling ends,
Till I’m empty again.


2/3/12
For Paula's "Thread" contest

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 11:31:00 AM
    this has a great concept and better yet great execution. strong start and a stronger finish your best work i have read yet not that i have read many yet lol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:37:00 PM
    hmmm, looks like no score? (me neither)

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 3:04:00 PM
    I like how you did your entry, Susan. I always love analogy and you held it to the very end with the theme you created. I hope it scores. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 1:56:00 PM
    What a powerful write Susan! I love how you keep wanting the thread out that has been straggling, that could be of evidence! I also love how you want to leave yourself empty again, to being anew, to start over! Like I said, very powerful poem! I really enjoyed reading it this fine afternoon! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 12:05:00 PM
    "too many tears wept to repair me now".That`s a very strong and heartfelt line,Susan! Take Care my friend,Arild

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Its interesting that alot of these "thread" poems are sad and full of angst. That said..I enjoyed the read..well done. BG

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 10:28:00 AM
    A very creative and good entry for contest,best wishes Elizabeth