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Her Very First Kiss

A blushing young, nervous girl sits atop his front porch steps, Scooting closer, he wants to feel the smoothness of her new suede vest, Hurriedly, she picks the bubblegum from her new braces. Written for Tracie's ~ Sijo Kisses Contest~ 2-4-12

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  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:18:00 PM
    hahaha, so cute, would love be this girl.... lovely sijo depicts that phase of "LOVE". but where are the rondelets, looking for them!!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:12:00 AM
    hahaha, yeah puppy love. Too bad I didnt through that phase. This is very sweet, Gwen :)

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 4:22:00 PM
    Perfect and perfectly innocent, including the "he wants to feel the smooth vest part" surrrrre......but then, maybe. I remember my first kiss at a 5th grade birthday party. Her name was Evelyn Carter. Some things you never forget..Didn't wash the lips for...until Mom did it for me (couple hours) Love the gum part. (You're not supposed to are you?) WHATEVER!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:14:00 PM
    hmmmm no win? I think it deserved one. Mine too was about a first kiss. So was this one YOU or just any little girl? it sure is cute, Gwen. Hubbie is home for rest of week so I don't know when I will get on that blog. I don't know if I can even finish my comments here tonight. I'm glad I got to see this sijo of yours. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Remember my first kiss Gwen, he said "part your lips and meet me half way" still can feel the sensation! Such a confusing time of life. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Sijo is a good form , that I don;t try enough... But you have put together a wonderful piece here... Lovely start ot finish.... luv and long hugs.. Michael

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:55:00 AM
    So cute brings back so many memories of when I had buck teeth and those ghastly rubber bands. Thanks dear sweet Gwendolen!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 12:18:00 AM
    I love this!! Reminds me of my awkward teenage years ;) congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Congratulations, Gwendolen on your win! Luv, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest, such a cute, cheeky little sijo, I like! :-)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 12:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Gwen x

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:17:00 AM
    my bet takes a bow... sweet congrats on your fine win, gwenie!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:06:00 AM
    Gwen congrats on your beautiful, stunning win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:30:00 AM
    congrats Gwendolen on a terrific third place win for your wonderful sijo kisses entry.. that first one is always so special and memorable luv..

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Oh love this, the last line, is brilliant. harry

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 4:54:00 PM
    :) :) :) :) Kiss - KYSS (Norsk) --------- Good luck in the contest G. oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 3:51:00 PM
    oh great . how cute is this! You have framed the true to life picture so nicely Gwendolen in this Sijo. Still smiling.. ... and thank you so much for your earnest and thoughtful comment on my recent poem. I do appreciate it when people show their love for our children. I loved your poem

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Gwen I just love this, you romantic you, is this you?..David

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