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MI AMIGA

I walked with you For just one mile today. I felt the joy Of reaching out And the touching Of our hands. I heard a sweet song In every word you spoke, And clearly understood The message of your heart. When I walked with you I never saw the hills we climbed, Or felt the many rocks Beneath my tired feet. Your awesome burden Seemed so light When added unto mine. I only saw the flowers Reflected in your eyes And felt the velvet Of your touch While pleasure soon became The destination of my path . . . . Now . . . Our walk has ended; The empty path seems wide, The weeds, the dust, and rocks Crowd every step I take. . . . Until . . . I think of you And the mile we walked today.

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  1. Date: 2/2/2012 10:03:00 PM

    William... a great walk... i feel up lifted now... thank you for sharing... what a walk can do with the one you trust..pd

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker Date: 2/4/2012 2:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Destroyer,Your response tells me alot about your spirit.Thanks for your comment. I'm impressed with your knowledge of all the types of poetry.I'll comment on some later.Crossfox.
  1. Date: 2/2/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Beautiful and romantick poem written William, I love it !! hand in hands- oxox hugs Anne-Lise