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Broken Heart

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Broken Heart

one heart black an blue abandon cold immortal few love annihilate by you ~*~ bleeding in duress a knife stabbed thy love to death the heart is split into ~*~ life in emptiness blackened loneliness covered thorny wreath ~*~ please save loveless me love fountain do cleanse over thee father time repair ~*~ love overjoyed open heart wishful warmness amorousness gold

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  1. Date: 2/3/2012 1:39:00 PM

    PS. I have sent you a soup mail

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 12:40:00 PM

    It is a beautiful poem Richard...touching... Broken heart can fixed (glue). A happy heart live longer Richard...be happy. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

    McClellan Avatar Richard McClellan Date: 2/3/2012 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Anne! I suffer from depression but I am trying my best to be happy!
  1. Date: 2/2/2012 9:43:00 PM

    Richard... this is more like free verse... but, I truly did enjoy stopping by tonight... this is about the way i feel right now.. My daughter has broken my heart... she beats it with out a heart beat... she has annihilated all i've thought her... oh..well sob sob!... had fun reading this 3 times...always..pd

    McClellan Avatar Richard McClellan Date: 2/3/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ok DP, I added more lines to it... lol
  1. Date: 2/2/2012 12:18:00 PM

    it"s alright

    beauvoir Avatar pedro beauvoir Date: 2/3/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    that is realy an amezine haiku
    McClellan Avatar Richard McClellan Date: 2/2/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    really that's it... I got a full version that is not traditional Haiku... lol