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when it comes to you

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when it comes to you

when it comes to you
i'm in a tizzy
my heart soars when you hold me 
in your arms and tell me you love me 
to the moon and back 
 but when i'm not with you 
the doubts creep in 
do you you really love me?
why would you love someone like me?
when it comes to you 
i'm in a tizzy 
i lve you more than life its self
and hate it when your not around
when i said i just wanted to be friends
i broke two hearts with those 
stupid simple words yours and mine
when it comes to you
i'm in a tizzy.

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Very well written,thank you for let me reading it. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise