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Equal To Auroral

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Equal To Auroral

You and I we live the dream
Nothing there could ever come between
Flattered I am that you still care
Its almost too much for a man to bare

Its in those little things you do and say
Makes me feel like a ship who finally found its quay
No longer lost out there in the rough seas
I know with you I will always feel at ease

Just lay your head on my pillow
Sleep with me tonight my love billow
Rest of the world does not exist
Heartbeats in my chest,I know this recipe will consist

Your virility is equal to the auroral I see dancing in the sky
In all eternity our warmth shall survive,never again lonely cry
Its like that impossible dream after all came true
I will always do my best effort to not hear you say the adieu


A.Ertsland
26th.January 2012

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:48:00 AM
    ohhhh la la !!! Romance lives on !!!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:15:00 AM
    beautiful! one can taste the deep love you have for your beloved, Arild. an everlasting piece. thank you for stopping by and your kind comment

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:50:00 PM
    I love the auroral reference - to me that is what I sense happening inside of me when I fall in love - weird, I know. Terrific write, Arild.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:44:00 PM
    Okay Mr. Romance! This is one awesome lyrical write..there are some intensely romantic images here for your Valentine..SHE should be enthralled to receive this song in her card..The final line is so touching...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 4:15:00 PM
    There is only one word to say Arild:BEAUTIFUL !!!! oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 10:24:00 AM
    This is such a lovely poem, Arild. Thanks for stopping by. I loved this one, especially the love billow part :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 8:14:00 AM
    To love someone is to fear them leaving. And when they're there, is beyond believing. Sometimes a heart gets much too old. And it learns to live where it's much too cold. So sleep dear one till the morning's nigh. With love in your heart till the day you die.

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 5:01:00 AM
    Arild great write , very romantic, you smoothy you..David

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 8:11:00 PM
    this has a lovely title to go with your theme, Arild. VEry nice it is! Love that "sleep with me tonight, love billow"

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Great passionate write Arild, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Beautiful words every woman longs to hear. Nicely done my friend. Loved the warmth and tenderness expressed here. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:20:00 AM
    A beautiful song this would make...What a sweet flow it has!!! My friend only one other time on my 2 years here on the Soup, has anyone ever compared me to John Lennon... You have made my day !!!! The bes compliment I can ever recieve!!....I thank you so much!! Michael

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 3:22:00 AM
    oh gee, arild!... such caressing images make my heart melt.. i love the auroral feel of it all and the vulnerable touch of your pen... sigh!..:) hugggs to you!

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:14:00 PM
    Very descriptive, creative, and passionate work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara