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Stifling

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Stifling

Respite
From boiling sun
Stealing my breath from me
My hear pounds as the heat drains me
Perspiration drips onto the hot ground
I sit quiet and dream of a breeze
Dark clouds gather above
Perhaps by night
Respite


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  1. Date: 2/4/2012 3:59:00 PM
    We are now in the middle of winter, and it is too cold outside to experience what you have described above. However, you have described it well with your wording. This is a good rictameter.

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    Date: 2/4/2012 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the comment, it's the middle of winter here as well. Just wanted something to warm me up.
  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:42:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing :-)

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 3:56:00 AM
    Thank you Nick for let me reading yours poem today,good. - oxox love Anne-Lise