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Everything a boy would need

Father you are ev'rything a boy would need 
Strong and Patient, Distant but always ready
never lost in emotion Like my Mum was
Shame that I'm a girl

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  1. Date: 1/29/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Hi, this is a very powerful poem. Amazing you can pack so much truth and emotion into only four lines. Great work.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 10:42:00 AM

    I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Nick. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Agree Nick,well done. oxox Anne-Lise