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You Make me feel like a Sunset

You make me feel like a 
Summer's sunset on a beach:
Watching the bight rays stretch
Out across the waves,
Saying one last golden goodbye to the world 
Before it goes to sleep; allowing 
The stars and moon to take its place in the 
Evening sky, as they sparkle across
The water like thousands of dancing snowflakes.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2012 6:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ernest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:04:00 AM

    This is a beautiful romantic poem, I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Sweet and lovely poem Ernest....well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 12:24:00 AM

    Very pretty image of sunsets and starry skies- beautiful, thank you for sharing, bren