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Infected Love -

Infected with love ~ (a collaboration with my daughter) ROYAL

BY: ROYAL

Everyone knows, yeah they know
surrounding myself with the thoughts of suicide
scars in my heart, hurting past tense, 
where have you gone, outta my sight
here is where you belong, come back.
you come and go come and go,
one day you weren't there no more.
things where good, I turn for a second 
now your gone,
you come back, just come back!
infect me with your love.
stop hurting me now, you left me wanting more.
I never showed how much I love you.

~~

BY:PD

All the pretty flowers,
Never will compare, to the passion in your eyes.
I never walked away, 
It was time for me to say goodbye....
Walking away, to another land.
Here, love is more than you'll ever understand.
I never left you alone, God had other plans.
I'm not gone, just relaxing till you arrive.
I took your infectious love with me.
If you only knew your sad injections,
Are still causing a stronger immunity.
Not even death wore-off your infection.
You never had to say it,
 I would seen it in your eyes...
Baby don't cry! 
Baby dry your eyes!
From here your still infecting me with your love.

~~

NOTE::
ROYAL
Top half was written by my daughter ROYAL~ 
She wrote the top half from my point of view... to my mother 
( who passed away on my son's birthday )

PD
Second half was written by ME,,,
I wrote my half from my mothers point of view (RIP)   
( who never got to hear them word, I LOVE YOU :-'( 
I held a grudge against her because she gave me up for adoption... 
 I loved her deeply... STILL DO...

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:29:00 PM

    Good day Linda. Thank very much, i really appreciate you taking your time out of your busy schedule and dedicate to my poem. i feel very blessed. Keeps the love of poetry burning and i would love to read one of your daughter’s poems. Fantastic

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Psssssst. Hey psssssst. Just popping in to say hello gorgeous!!! MJF xoxox

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Hello, my dear friend, PD! Nice to see your new avatar. You're so pretty- d incoming beautiful celebrity in this Land of Poetry!! I hope & pray that you're always fine. By the way, I've started the other day my acrostic, rainbow, but because of my hectic schedule i plan to continue later because tomorrow (Sun.) we've again a whole day activity in school. I'll be dancing in the program, LOl. lucky today that we don't have classes. But, your contest I think got full, lol. It's ok. Tcare! Love,LG

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:16:00 AM

    I know from my own exspeaiences when people say times a healer i doint think is true I think everything just changes around you I did not know you had kids or you were adopetd you seem to haave come along way I can see the love in your heart as the words speck for them self sorry for your loss nice title to luv david scott

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 8:53:00 PM

    A great tribute and love overflows in this heart touching write my friend. In her simple beautiful words even Royal has moved our hearts. Give my blessings to her. This is really a wonderful emotional write which I missed earlier. I am really sad for the loss of your mother. May God give you and your family member’s courage to face this great loss and grant eternal peace to your loving mother. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Poet D

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 3:12:00 PM

    I love your message in this poem,,,,to read this poem showed me a healing way of expressing your emotions and your moms,,,I heard the LOVE overcome the circumstances,,,Love heals all wounds!!

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 3:11:00 PM

    I love your message in this poem,,,,to read this poem showed me a healing way of expressing your emotions and your moms,,,I heard the LOVE overcome the circumstances,,,Love heals all wounds!!

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:27:00 AM

    Love this emotional write from both you and your daughter..Sad story and yet you are a strong beautiful woman.!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:22:00 PM

    Immaculate write,Wow,very nice.

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 11:20:00 AM

    True love lets go when they think its for the best even if the one letting go hurts first and knows you will hurt later. but not as much as if she held on... much love

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 6:58:00 PM

    Wonderful--very touching, the talent runs in the family!

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 1:14:00 AM

    hey sweetie, I am dying to get off because though it's just after 1, in reality it's after 2 for me! haha.I am gonna be tired before church! I'll stop one more time and see if you answered my soupmail!! Otherwise, I'll check in the a.m. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 3:01:00 AM

    Thanks, PD, for your kind comment, Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 10:34:00 PM

    An excelent write my dear Pd but painful to read at the same time..I know these feelings ....u did a great job...

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 2:23:00 AM

    Very deep feelings beautiful write deep from witin the heart from both of you...Mother daughter how wonderful!Hugs Lizzie

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 11:15:00 PM

    Thanks, PD for your kind comment and best wishes re my Spring poem. I can only imagine what it would be like to be adopted. My mom was, and then kidnapped in her teens by her real mom and taken to another country. That kind of pain needs a special closure, but writing always helps.....Take care, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 10:57:00 AM

    There are many reasons for choosing adoption, but never - giving up..... I was adopted, too......................George

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 1:08:00 AM

    Appreciate your poems and comments. Blessings to you and have a great day!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:50:00 PM

    what a loving and cathartic moment for you and royal, PD... this heart-popping write is a classic... thank you for making my day and sharing your self... misty-eyed!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:16:00 AM

    I think it's really cool that you and Royal finally were able to write a collab-- a sad write but I think one can relate to this on some level-- I like the analogy f=of thet "infectious love"-- very nicely done, you two! I hope all's well with you and thanks for sharing that part about your mom & your son's bday-- I think that happened for a reason, the date I mean...

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Awesome! PETER ADELAKUN.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:42:00 AM

    a very emotional verse. Thanks for sharing your work with us. May you find peace i your soul and life. Jancarl Thanks for your comments on "one mean kid"

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 4:20:00 AM

    such emotions here, both parts of this are wonderful. harry

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:47:00 AM

    I am glad to have read your poem before any other today. Your words have indeed touched my heart, deeply. I pray that you find solace and peace in your life.

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 6:10:00 PM

    Asw Wilma said, the emotions are raw and thats what makes it true to life . Touching and complex collab PD and Royal God bless you and yours

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 5:23:00 PM

    lovely poem PD, I love this very much makes me want to run out and hug my mom!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:59:00 PM

    A brilliant dedication that I can truly relate to. My mother passed away nearly 17 years ago. Your poem is very uplifting for me!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:52:00 PM

    I enjoyed your collab Pd, the emotions quite raw this is what makes it a gem. Hope you are doing okay, I have been a bit absent from the soup :) tc

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:33:00 AM

    Writing with rare intuition, both of you have excelled in bringing out the right feelings , S.J

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Awwww, this is...amazing PD...Amazing. I missed reading your poems, and if I remember correctly Royal was pretty awesome at writing herself. This proves it once again (:

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