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Having toned and centered all will to this: 
	MY DEBUT!.
	Peeling off the filth, grime and thinly veiled sins of writing:
	I reach.
	Exposing a new viral skin, a candied armor:
	poteat and swirled. 
	Old ways, crumple to the earth like wet dust,
	pooling dry.

	And I:
	emerge as a cataclysmic beam of energy,
	plugged in,
	magnetized, inhaleing the vigor, through my mind,
	until a quazar of light implodes, sending bursts of thought,
	into the Cartesian coordinates,
	hanging tidspits, of poetic data
	here and there.

	My body quivers, 
	unseen, yet deep to bone.
	I envision space, with dark pulsating ideologies.

	Knarling them like twine,
	I collect the alphabeted  fog.
	To form an adjective, 
	so connected to the attempt,
	I must open my mind
	and reach inside with care.

	To touch that, which is forbidden,
	and bring out into this world,
	where it does not belong, so it will grace a page.

	And then I sigh,
	
	Does my heart control effort?
	I turn and leave,
	exhausted from, 
	continuing to look at the blank.

	

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Sandra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Lovely debut,Sandra!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 10:19:00 AM
    i can only echo Robert's comments below. i can see we have an exceptional poet here. harry

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 7:58:00 AM
    The work of a master. Welcome back.

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 5:17:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sandra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

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    Date: 1/18/2012 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She doesn't know you've been around a while.