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To all the heartbreakers- -a valentine poem-

Wouldn't you rather~

Wouldn't you rather~ be dead?
Maybe shoot yourself in the head?
Over my dead body, I would never want you to be mine.
Like the Towers that collapse, and left one big shattered shrine.
I want to see you fall from limb to limb, until the end of your time.
Sorry that the sight of you looks like a 3 legged swine.
So go ahead and do us a all favor, 
hide and stash yourself away from all your neighbor. 
I think i'd rather have my eyes stuck with glue
So I won't have to look at you
When it comes to family friends, you ain't got none.
Your always gonna be called the lonely retarded one.
Who could ever love a face like yours.
not even your mother can see pass your gore's 
No need for privacy when you pee
Go ahead and take a leak and drown yourself in the sea.
Don't think for one second you are irresistible 
Even love making with yourself is impossible.

Wouldn't you rather be dead
maybe shoot yourself in the head

The time to kill yourself is at hand.
Slicing your wrist is what we recommend.  
Cut off your tongue, don't want to hear you squeal.   
Blood all over, your face is no big deal
A sword or machete will only pick up the pace
I wanna see your guts pop out your mid-waist 
Contaminated objects is a must
Anything to remove your face of disgust.
The easy part is the best
Once you are gone we will all feel blessed,
The flaw of your existence  
Is what keeps us all in distance 

Wouldn't you rather be dead
maybe shoot yourself in the head

Close your eyes and die
No one wants to hear you cry
You said you wanted to be loved
believe me~ your better off unloved
I say go do yourself off
Anyways you've always had it rough...
Go ahead and scream
This is not a dream
Now see how you make me feel
All I want is for you to end your ugly ordeal.
I will praise this day of course
Knowing soon you'll be a rotting corpse.

happy valentine ~ TO: All My X-es that live in Texas..

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 9:51:00 AM

    lovely poem!!! reading dis poem gave me more energy to deal with people whu fake love!!! loved it.. gr8ly composed.. :) - Nishita (nishu)

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 10:06:00 AM

    WOW....this is great! Best to get the anger out then to bottle it up I say. Hugs

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 8:41:00 AM

    These are the things that went through my mind about someone. I really love this one!!!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Girl I feel ya!!!! I was reading your poem and I had all kinds of love for ya cuz I have deffo been there. Thanks for the comments on my poem. My poems dont rhyme they're not meant to and I dont write them to do that. I had a guy who wrote a comment that was kinda rude. I wasn't gonna post anymore poems but after what u wrote I think I will. I will just ignore guys like that. Thanks again S.K.A.T!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:52:00 PM

    Hi i,m Kevin thanks for reading my poem, and for being kind to it, i just read your poem, to all the heart breakers some deep feeling there i sense and well written.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Your words burn onto the page and the reader feels a rise in pulse. You take the essence of hurt distilled from countless tears and paint your words with this potent brew of emotions. The raw emotions within your words capture the heart with their strength of anger and truth while devastating the soul with their passion. Your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires alive within your verses.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM

    Got to be my favorite line. "happy valentine ~ TO: All My X-es that live in Texas.." Thank you for you comments on mine, all the best. hiram

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:37:00 PM

    SMELLING HATE'S UNSOUND SMILES, LOVELY DONE. SORRY FOR LATE, LOVED ALWAYS, BL

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:14:00 PM

    NICE! I'M SURE YOU TOOK THE WORDS OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF SO MANY WOMAN :) GOOD JOB!!! I SENSE THIS WAS A POEM FOR ALL CAPITALS AS WE HAVE DISCUSSED. LOL...GREAT!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Great for someone who is angry at their ex ;D

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:54:00 PM

    This one got me all jangly!!! I feel like I need to go express myself now.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Hi, my dear Sidney! Stopping by to read again this awesome poem of yours which make me smile. By the way, advance happy valentines! Thank you so much for stopping by and your congratulatory comments on my poems. Sorry if my expression of gratitude comes only now because this past few days I spent more time with my piano and paintings. Pls. say Hi to your sis. I'm sad because I'm missing your name on the side of this site; but, hope, I can see again soon. take care always! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:22:00 PM

    This is AWESOME!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:01:00 AM

    ..."*.)? LOL. There You Go Baby Girl, Let It Out Let It Bleed Let It Drip Unto The Ground This Need Those Exes Cast In These Hexes ˜ Good Morning, Sweet Beautiful *Skat! I Was Thinking Of Your Beautiful And Just Wanted To Stop By And Wish You A Very Blessed As Wonderful Day ˜ Dig The Power In The Poe And Quite A Twist From Traditions Valentine's Image; Sweet ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:15:00 PM

    and yes, I LOVE the HEY MICKEY song!!!whatever became of that singer?

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 6:10:00 AM

    ARE ALL MEN IN TEXAS THAT BD OR ARE YOU LOOKING IN THE RWOG PLACES GOOD WRITE A BIT ON DARK SIDE XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:39:00 PM

    Oh yes. I love this. The first two lines drew me in. The gore and disturbance of your words A+. Terrific way to express your feeling of those exes. Haha Kudos

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:21:00 PM

    the only thing that follows my love is hate. love should last a life time.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:39:00 AM

    LOL damn i wudnt want to disappoint you gud poem

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:55:00 AM

    I bet they can't get over you either.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Hi Skat, that's some anger for those Ex's . Thanks so much for my placement in your Garage Sale Contest. I am very honoured.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Hi, Siddy!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:30:00 AM

    Hi SKAT...Just a quick thank you for including my poem on your winners list...much appreciated! - Tim

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Though this poem is bloody yet I enjoyed the rhyme and some humorous lines there.Thanks for my HM in your Contest A Poet Garage Sale.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Hi, back at ya, Siddy!!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Heartbrakers indeed, that's a very heartfelt and emotional expressed story. Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 10:27:00 PM

    Hi, my dearest Skat/Siddy! Every time I turn on this poem page of yours, I always smile! I remember, this is one of my keepsakes from you. Thank you so much and million thanks for everything and your congratulatory comments today! You made me smile! i love you dear! I need to read more of the other poems of yours! love/hugs:) Leonora

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/20/2012 10:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This poem depicts strength. I love it!
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:42:00 AM

    WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR CONTEST WINNERS LISTS SKAT .. SHOWING NO NAMES LUV ????????????????

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Soupy Mail

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:38:00 PM

    Very interesting look on relationships SKAT....very well written

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