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The sculptors pen

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The sculptors pen

The sculptor’s pen writes my pain
Etched words flow in my veins
I writhe inside- distorted  
I am controlled 
Not by what I want
But by a vision 
Perceived
Inside
The 
Sculptors
Mind
Upon the 
Floor
discarded
Scattered
Askew
His
Ideas
Control
What
I do
 
 ©? Brenda V Northeast   13th January 2012

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  1. Date: 1/15/2012 1:16:00 AM
    I see the inspiration writes through you Brenda..! this is all to the "greater good" welcome aboard..)

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/15/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Joe and your kind welcome, Blessings to you, Bren : )
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 11:37:00 PM
    Brenda....I can smell a flower that drifts between these lines (I'm serious) delightful! fragrant! jimbo

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/15/2012 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh James that is so, so sweet, thank you, blessings to you too, Brenda : )
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Hmmmm Lots of emotion here. "The sculptor's pen writes my pain." Guess it depends upon who the Sculptor is. I like to think the Sculptor is God slowly chipping away all the bad stuff to reveal the beauty inside. Nice piece here. Good imagery. God Bless, JB Nice to meet you Brenda. Please peek in again.

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/14/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You Too Judy I am so thrilled to meet so many nice people here, blessings, Bren It is funny where these thoughts come from, on reflection, I think it is like a writer writes the characters in their novels or whatever and some land on the floor screwed up to be later rewrites : )
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Very thoughtful and creative poem! Blessings to you!!!

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/14/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jim : )
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:05:00 AM
    The sculptor's pen writes your pain, you got me i this line.. loved this verse. Deeply written. Thanks for your kind comment on my page, Brenda :).

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/14/2012 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dinda blessings, Bren : )
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 3:19:00 AM
    very well-penned poem Brenda! i love the flow here

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/14/2012 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mia : )
  1. Date: 1/13/2012 8:30:00 PM
    Such a beautiful poem, so creative and I enjoyed it very much, Greg

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/13/2012 8:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Greg, : )