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Water

Out of the vastness of void
He called water into being
And as the first rain drop formed 
Suspended before her Master’s eyes
Arrested by the sight of his brilliance 
She captured a portion of spirit divine
His beauty, glorious and incredible
Found her delirious with joy!
And amidst the vacuous silence, 
Her eternal song arose
Echoing throughout the deep
A solitary sigh of ecstasy; ascending 
Reaching a thunderous roar… 
She'd ride the four winds forever!
~*~
 



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  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this very expressive work this morn..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Not exactly sure what you are saying though..Is it about God creating water and wind and their response to God?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:13:00 AM

    touching and oh so beautiful written Annalise! loved it 100% from first to last line:) It carries the fine spirit of the writer

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:51:00 PM

    I agree with everything Greg says below.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Wow, what imagery, and so beautiful. I enjoyed it very much, Greg

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Wow, Annalise. THis is really good writing. What inspired this from you? LOVE it.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Very imaginative and romantic, love it, Brenda :)

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:44:00 PM

    A very touching piece here.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:42:00 PM

    annalise, how are you?...so delightful and marvelous in language and imagery..the treasure box of your poetic gems is filled to overflow. ..:) huggs!