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Addicted

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Addicted

addicted!!!
oh baby just addicted
all other thoughts in my mind r restricted
 going insane day by day
plz stop the game that you play

I've surrendered all my ways
more how much should i chase?
I know there are some problems that you face.
don't even know how i am passing my days

my body breathes
my body moves
but
i can feel no one around me
i feel no world around me

standing in middle of the road
my whole world is slowed
 my eyes closed
with all my memories disclosed

just want to pass my days
searching all possible ways
just want to flow with the time
want to move on
baby it troubles.. more how long??

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  1. Date: 7/19/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Great writing. I liked the flow of it and love the use of "baby" as if speaking to someone, maybe even pleading with them.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:19:00 PM
    familiar thoughts