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Chilled Aspirations

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Chilled Aspirations

Winter winds cut through me,
I'm freezing to the bone;
Visibility's slim to zero,
I wish I'd stayed at home!

Am I the lonely walker?
I feel just like a jerk;
Bills are pilin' on me,
Somebody's gotta work!

These tiny flakes are stinging,
Looks like I missed my bus;
My feet are frozen solid,
There ain't no need to fuss!

Eleven blocks await me,
My mood is foul and drab;
I can't even bum a ride,
Where in hell is a cab?

I can see my job from here,
It's lookin' mighty slow;
The boss won't be too happy,
He'd better be glad I showed!

At last, the main entry,
I'm greeted by a sign which read;
CLOSED DUE TO BAD WEATHER,
I could've been warm in bed!




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  1. Date: 7/19/2013 11:53:00 PM

    Oh no....that would totally suck.......lol amusing poem Milt....i gotta few giggles reading that....Shaz

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 12:37:00 PM

    ahhhhhh that is so sad Milt. Keep em coming. Love, Caeol

    Toran Avatar Milton Toran Date: 1/10/2012 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carol! God bless U!...Milt
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 9:58:00 AM

    This is a very cool write in more ways that one. I love the way you tell a complete story and the fact that it is also humorous. Very well done. Chez x

    Toran Avatar Milton Toran Date: 1/10/2012 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much and God bless U!...Milt