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Untitled

I'm barely hanging on myself,
But you're too busy to notice.
So wrapped up in your own lives,
I'm easliy forgotten.
I'm the one,
Juggling all our schedules
Just so we can hang out.
Playing messenger,
So we can all stay in touch.
I thought that I could do this,
But I'm barely hanging on myself.



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  1. Date: 1/6/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Hang in there Erica!!! You can do this and more - if you put your mind to it - after all, if you can write such beautiful poetry, you can achieve anything. PS - I think 2nd line the "your" should be "you're".

    Gould Avatar Erica Gould Date: 1/10/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!! And you were right about the second line.
  1. Date: 1/6/2012 10:56:00 AM

    You must be a mother or father,this poem fits the everyday life of those in charge. It,s very truthful.

    Gould Avatar Erica Gould Date: 1/10/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not yet, but I had never thought of it that way.