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Vitamin Sea

I went to the beach 
For my vitamin sea
To drink in the zing 
Of an orange setting sun  
As it spritzed liquid gold
Onto zesty shimmering sand 

© Brenda V northeast   6th January   2012

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:05:00 AM
    People can get their vitamin D from basking in the sunshine. Vitamin C (ascorbic acid) is water soluble and is usually obtained by consuming citrus fruits and green leafy vegetables. Nevertheless, your poem is impressively descriptive.

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/11/2012 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert for your kind comments, it was the overall effect of the orange sunset that conjured the Vit C/SEA play on words and images- thank you for your input, blessings, Brenda : )
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 4:29:00 AM
    Dear Brenda, It's people like you who enable me to say "Why I Love truly PoetrySoup". You are so kind. God bless, Maureen :)

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/11/2012 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Maureen, Love and blessings, Brenda
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 9:22:00 PM
    Thank you Brenda for your kind comments. I messed up the poem by cutting it down to 15 lines, but glad you still were able to enjoy it! Love, M :)

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/11/2012 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sacrifice in length is hazardous sometimes to a poem, but your poem certainly read well so need not fear Maureen your inspiring message was heart felt. Love, Brenda : )
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:46:00 PM
    Very creative write...much enjoyed. Passing an empty glass, fill-er-up !!!

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/9/2012 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cheers Debra, Brenda : )
  1. Date: 1/7/2012 2:03:00 PM
    Yes! I`ll have a drink on that beach,Brenda:) Beautiful written.Love,Arild

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/7/2012 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Arild : ) Brenda