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shattered sky

The Star ignites the lonely sky
placidity of the moon is broken
tears like raindrops falling from my eyes.
words are no longer heard.
Distance delays and destroys
... ... but your presence is still felt
amidst the gloomy night.
Hurt my heart and take my life.
My living beauty will haunt you
in your formidable grey years,
till we meet in the graveyard...
....

.Redfiery copyright 2011.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Woow this one made the hair stand up on the back of my neck.

    Fiery Avatar Red Fiery Date: 8/13/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad that u liked it Richard...:)
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 7:02:00 PM

    Beautiful poem on lost love.Nice use of metaphors.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:10:00 AM

    Powerful stuff here !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 11:19:00 PM

    Interesting parallel on life/love and the sky. It reminds me of an amazing meteor shower I saw the other night. Please continue to share the works.

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 8:19:00 AM

    WOW! Nuff said! X

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 6:13:00 AM

    You have so much talent and skill that this page can barely hold it.. Im so impressed by your creativity....mmmm maybe a collab in our future???...oxo Michael

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 8:43:00 PM

    your words are powerfull,,,wow,,,kicking it hard,,girl....

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 1:29:00 PM

    great work here my friend! Strong..but Im not sure I want to meet in the graveyard! your writing strength revealed to it fullest,Red.Love,Arild