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You

The world was dark blue as only the full moon and twinkling stars light the deadly stillness.
A lake as dark and steady as death should be
A white light was gleaming in the emptiness
I didn't know what it was...
A mermaid from the lake? 
An angel from God?
All I knew is that it was a She             
I said hello. She giggled..
And Oh her giggle played with my ears     
I asked again, who are you?
She giggled another time and said, Come closer to see
As my heart was beating like a jungle drum I stepped forward
I was shocked because I saw something more beautiful than anything in the world         
I was speechless, I was paralyzed...
The entire world seemed to stop, the hushing of the trees seemed miles away
My legs felt weak, my heart took flight
I couldn't believe what my eyes were seeing 
Because they were seeing... You

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:42:00 PM

    Sami, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 12:06:00 AM

    Great narrative! Beautiful words!

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 7:53:00 AM

    WOW Sami.....this is a great one!

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Beautiful Sami,I like it alot....beautiful! OXOX love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:15:00 AM

    nice poem, sami. Enjoyed! Hugs, Catie :)