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Last and passed

A year is closed
 It is called, last
 Yet it didn't last
 A reminder to those
 Who traversed
 under rough weather,
 that those do pass.

May you know how much God loves you!

My sincere wishes to all for a very happy, healthy and extraordinary New Year 2012 to you and yours! God bless!

CarolineCecile - 01/01/2012!

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:37:00 AM

    so much depth to this wonderful poem. happy new year.. harry

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 8:56:00 PM

    I like that. it is now called last, but it didn't last. So TRUE. It's fun to find parodoxes in words! I enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 2:19:00 AM

    Good one,well written C.C. HAPPY 2012 TO YOU. OXOX love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 12:06:00 AM

    Hi Caroline...I'm with Greg on the comma. This is a lovely yet brief gem..a neat lil package of a poem. Happy New Year to you. Gwendolen