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Suzanna

There was a young girl from Japan 
Whose name was Suzanna Tienshan 
She didn’t wanna work 
Her whole life as a clerk 
So she married a dirty old man.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Hi Cheryle -- Thanks for putting a smile on my face. I'm new and just putzing around. Kathy

    sanders Avatar cheryle sanders Date: 1/10/2012 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Kathryn, i'm new here also, well about two weeks old. Thanks for commenting on this, much appreciated! chez x
  1. Date: 1/1/2012 10:43:00 PM

    Speaking as a dirty old man, I see Suzanna wishing she were a clerk again. He, he.

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 10:22:00 PM

    Ha! That's nice work. Keep it up!

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 3:04:00 PM

    oh and are you from japan ? ( look me up to tell )

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 3:02:00 PM

    hey that is kind of needs more these are more words that can go with it dork , fork and hork come on

    sanders Avatar cheryle sanders Date: 1/1/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me thinks you need to polish up on your English! And it is a Haiku, a Japanese style of poetry. Thanks for your comment! chezchez