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Feeling The Beginning

I sleep looking at the stars in the sky
And wake up with the dawn in my eyes.
Birds awaken me,singing my dreams
Fluttering wings springing through sunbeams.

Tinges of pink brush  the sky's edge
As the sun appears at the horizon's ledge.
A blushing sky then turns pale white
Phenomenon of dawn,a poetic delight.

Flowering buds bloom in greeting to a new day
A breeze rocks the trees giving it a gentle sway
Dewdrops sparkle on trees,leaves
On nature's flight,the butterflies,bees.

Into my mouth, a dewdrop I tip
Natural freshness,I inhale,sip.
I don't want this morning to end
I feel the heat as the sun takes a bend.



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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:16:00 PM

    Many congrats on this fine win dear Yas

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:16:00 PM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 2:46:00 PM

    Congrats, Yasmin. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:33:00 PM

    I real like this. Congrats on your win Yasmin. Connie

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Beautiful rhyme and thoughts Yasmin!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:48:00 AM

    This is just beautiful. Congratulations on your win Yasmin. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 11:42:00 PM

    fantastic poem you penned here my friend Yasmin. I like the feeling too. Congratulations on your win. Hugs from me to you, Maria :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:54:00 PM

    Yasmin,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:55:00 PM

    YASMIN..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 11:33:00 AM

    This goes to my Favs Yasmin.Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 9:30:00 AM

    A lovely poem. I can just see the things you describe. Enjoyed !!! Congrats on the placement in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 7:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol It is so wonderful to see you entered and winning in the contests my friend.

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Lucky you to be someplace to do all these wonderful things while I freeze my butt off! Seriously, it sounds like a perfect day. :)

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:40:00 AM

    This is a beautiful write, a lovely way tstrt the new year.... luv n endless hugs to you... Michael

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 3:34:00 AM

    A masterpiece from you Yasmin.It's a gem of a poem.Wish you and yours a very very happy New Year.