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Perfume


Your cologne, your pheromone have just blown 
over me.  Now my testosterone 
leaves me dying to do 
all of those things for you 
I do in your erogenous zone.

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  1. Date: 1/7/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Howdy, John. Powerful stuff cologne, women. Enjoyed on a carnal level. daver

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 10:35:00 PM
    more poems more poems. Unless you can think of one of yours I haven't seen yet??

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 3:21:00 PM
    LOL, witty write : )

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 4:16:00 PM
    Passionate work..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Hey, john, just stopping by to say hi. I am taking a long time to see comments. That's what happens when I miss one day! But I enjoy it anyway. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 11:02:00 PM
    That's the first time I ever saw a limerick constructed that way. Your description and rhyming are quite impressive here.

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 1:44:00 PM
    john, this is cute as can be. But you chose a word or two next to impossible for a limerick beat (I know you like to know those things!) Actually it comes off rather nicely metered. LInes 3 and 4 are excellent for the beat. It was sure nice to catch you here today. I'm finally going off now. The chiro killed my neck. He cracked it when it was already feeling JUST FINE. So I think I'll lie down and just watch tv.