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Graveyard diggers- a frustrated quest

LETS NOT CRY FOR THOSE WHO ARE DEAD

AS EMOTIONS ARE BURIED IN THE GRAVEYARD

LONGING FOR LOVE IS FUTILE

PALE AND FRAGILE

I WISH THOSE BLUE EYES

TO BE MINE FOREVER

ALAS ! DREAMS ARE THE ENEMIES OF DAYLIGHT

MOONLIGHT IS CONCEALING MY THOUGHTS

INSOMNIA IS GRIPPING MY VISION

WAYWARD THOUGHTS CULMINATES AS

MY LOVE POEMS ARE CHAINED IN PRISON…








Redfiery
2011




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  1. Date: 1/12/2012 8:04:00 PM

    I know the meaning of the last line.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:09:00 AM

    An interesting and emotional poem, I kind of felt it was two poems run into one, could have easily split it after line 6, enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Bravo! Here's hoping that this year sees you find the person with the keys to unlock your prison, so both can live through an eternal night of sweet dreams.

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 9:27:00 AM

    loved it.

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 7:20:00 AM

    What a wonderful poem this is, Dreams are the enemy of daylight. wow just blows one away. Oh, by the way, i was a grave digger at the age of 15, not many poets can admit to that. Have yourself a wonderful New Year. harry

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 3:14:00 AM

    Red I like this, but let your inner love poems be unchained..David

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 8:30:00 PM

    evoking emotions you presented here Red. pretty profound stuff. wishing you a great happy new year to come

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 2:14:00 PM

    Very dramatic,Red..sent chills down my spine.And I mean that in a positive way..hope your love poems wont be chained for too long.Happy New Year,Red Fiery