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It's raining hard in some hidden places

It's raining again
again
rain
the sky is low
the wind goes crazy
talking nonsense
calling your name
by the beach bar
where we first 
met
it's raining again
it's getting dark

i want you back...

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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 9:43:00 AM

    Hi Dino. This reminded me of a romantic vacation I once took...I like the personified wind calling your name. Enjoyed. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 9:20:00 AM

    You gave an image to emtion here that is unique, I like it.