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Can I trust you with a little secret

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Can I trust you with a little secret

Can I trust you with a little secret?
Would your ear promise
And your lips not betray?
Would you fix me in my past
And my present considered a facile?
Would you assume the divine power
And pronounce a second chance from afar?
Would you be human and right
And think me unworthy?
Oh, would you be so vigilant
And be quick to see the my eye specks 
While I ignore the logs in yours?
Would you judge by sight and sound
Or by the spirit that see further of the two?


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  1. Date: 12/27/2011 4:24:00 PM

    I like this one, it reminds me of someone who is doing all the giving, and then, someone who is reckless. Enjoyed! Catie

    oshin Avatar ifedayo oshin Date: 12/28/2011 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Catie, thanks for your reading and commenting.. what is a a good opera with an appreciating audience?