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Ketchup Stains You

The night you tried I was trying to enjoy a cheeseburger I called your bluff blindly I was bored by you You decided to prove me wrong I heard the distinct click the noisy pop my burger dropped I had ringing in my ears It landed on the plate bloody with ketchup ketchup splatters everywhere Burgers remind me of you I don't dare eat them They make me sick.

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  1. Date: 1/2/2012 4:52:00 AM

    This is a little dynamo, Liberty. It is succinct and emotive. Everyday life writes like this one are what makes great poets! Gwendolen

    Robbins Avatar Liberty Robbins Date: 1/3/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!