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Liquor Lips

If I were the bottle 
You would press your lips to my neck nightly.
If I were the liquid
 You would consume me multiple.
But I am just a woman
Who needs your attention always. 
If only you could
Liquor lips.

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:56:00 PM

    some nice ah!!!

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Absolutely fantastic bit of lines here. Suddenly, I'm thirsty...hmm.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 4:29:00 PM

    In my state, we have to be at least twenty-one years of age to kiss liquor lips. They stopped asking for my ID at bars and liquor stores a long time ago. I see this work is featured this week. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Congratulations Liberty on this weeks win, keep up the good work. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Quite telling. Good job.

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on the week`s win Liberty!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liberty. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 7:44:00 PM

    simple yet soo sweet

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 6:29:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Liberty. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol