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Two beautiful butterflies

Two beautiful butterflies
enjoying the sunny morning
playing on a floating lotus
they welcome the new spring.

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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 2/23/2012 4:56:00 PM
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    A pretty picture. Congrats on your win, Spandan! Love, Kim
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 2/23/2012 4:06:00 AM
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    Perfect entry of rhyme! In my community we have a place called the Butterfly House that hosts a vast vocabulary of variety...Of course you see as many photographers as butterflies on the sunniest of days. I've been know to lie on the ground for several minutes at a time trying to capture that "just right" angle of what your poem depicts. Congrats on your win, Spandan. May you have so so so many more! ps..Hope you excelled in your finals! Miss Gwendolen
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    RALPH TAYLOR
    Date: 2/22/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    Congrats, spandan. Excellent write. Great job. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/22/2012 9:51:00 AM
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    congrats spandan on an exciting win for lovely words on Spring ..luv..
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:33:00 AM
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    ohhh spandan... you make my day!.. congrats with love and huggs.. hope you're done with your exams so you can write, write, write! :)
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 2/22/2012 5:38:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in ~P.D.'s~ "Spring~tease" contest Spandan. Love, Carol
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/22/2012 1:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations SpandAN a well deserved win Like the pictuer it paints xx
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    Samual Ronthorpe
    Date: 2/22/2012 12:28:00 AM
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    Spandan, beautiful images here. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list...............S.Ronthorpe
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 2/21/2012 11:28:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win in PD's Contest, Spandan! Ruben.

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 3/23/2012 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also Thanks to you Ruben
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/21/2012 11:10:00 PM
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    SPANDAN.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful SPRING poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 3/23/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks also to you poet destroyer-
    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 3/23/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks also to you poet destroyer-
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/21/2012 6:49:00 PM
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    charming! I'm not sure I have ever seen a lotus for real? Light & Love

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 3/23/2012 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks For your kind comments Debbie----
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 1/21/2012 6:45:00 AM
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    Oh oh...I just read Nette's comment below...are you Kashi's son? Wow...NO WONDER!!! No wonder u write so welll. Hey, welcome to the Soup, Spandan. Welcome to our wonderful fantasy land of writing where you can paint an image with words and all your dreams can come true!! I am sooo glad to meet u! .....

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/25/2012 2:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for commenting in my poem.
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 1/21/2012 6:42:00 AM
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    Awww, these 2 butterflies are flirting and soaking up the sun..this is a great opening act for spring..gotta keep this image alive...It's 4 degrees at my home right now...you warmed my heart! A very wonderful poem you wrote..Keep nature at the center of your pen! Gwendolen

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/25/2012 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh really!!!My god! Thanks for your kind comments
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 1/11/2012 1:47:00 AM
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    spandan dear, you are much better than your dad.. at your age , the depth of your thought inspires.. so beautiful!..:) huggs!

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/17/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for commenting in my poem and enjoyed your poem also.....spandan
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 1/8/2012 10:52:00 AM
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    Light and delightful!!

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/17/2012 6:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debra for commenting in my poem...spandan
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/28/2011 10:20:00 PM
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    Awesome, Spandan. you should have your dad teach you how to do the short asian forms. This could probably be fit into a kimo or tanka or something like that!

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/18/2012 1:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for commenting in my poem.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/27/2011 5:23:00 AM
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    Beauti..........(.....new spring........) OXOX love Anne-Lise

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/18/2012 1:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne for giving me comments in my poem.....spandan
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/27/2011 1:40:00 AM
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    Wonderful imagery here .Lovely poem.

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar Date: 1/18/2012 2:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind comments in my poem kash poet.....spandan


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