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Love Given

                                                     I don't give you my love,
                                                     like a toy to be discarded;
                                                     but more like a treasure, 
                                                     to be very fondly regarded;
                                                     not to be passed all around,
                                                     as though a sweet tart;
                                                     but rather to be held close,
                                                     become part of your heart;
                                                     should never be exploited, 
                                                     and used for personal gain;
                                                     but in your heart and mind,
                                                     it should always remain;
                                                     should be your bodies blood,
                                                     to always keep you living,
                                                     the reason you give to me,
                                                     the love you are giving.

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  1. Date: 12/26/2011 5:56:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading this poem today. Keep up the beautiful work! Always, Laura

    Karzmarczyk Avatar Ronald Karzmarczyk Date: 12/26/2011 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank-you,very much appreciated. love Ron
  1. Date: 12/26/2011 4:38:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work..Good rhyming and flow to your work..Sara

    Karzmarczyk Avatar Ronald Karzmarczyk Date: 12/26/2011 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank-you much, comments appreciated. love Ron