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The Wall

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The Wall

We haven't spoken in so long
The wall has been built up
Big and strong.

But now I'm reaching to You
And I feel no sign coming.

Is the wall too high,
Can you see me?

Do You realize I need a guide?
I've been gone so long, I hid.

But now I'm here
I need a sign.

I'm reaching up to You
Please hear my cries.

Now I realize all the pain inside
Now I know what it feels like...
To have light, but also hear nothing.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 9:39:00 PM
    Check out the second line of your fourth verse. I believe you inadvertently omitted the "e" where you have typed "gon". Everything else looks fine.