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Loaf of Energy

~ADHD~

Beautiful Coffee
close your eyes, taste the sunrise
somebody stop me!!!!!


lol~ This coffee keeps me busy at my restaurant.

Merry X-mass everyone.. xoxox

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:11:00 AM

    hmmnnn!!! I am not drinking coffee but I think i like it now, lol. This is a great Haiku of my Great Poet!!! I want to be the first to greet advance Merry Christmas because we're now in -er months! love and hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:26:00 AM

    can't be stop huh! keep coffeeing.nice expression.

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:09:00 AM

    lol.."somebody stop me"..love this Haiku..I noticed that it was posted on X-mas..smiles

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:52:00 AM

    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment P.D. Love, Carol"

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 1:06:00 PM

    And even relief in her pains and restlessness. Keep doing this as many times as you can for 2-3 minutes to give her energy after taking it from God (Jesus). This is called Rekhi the science introduced by Gautama Buddha. Your mother would get lot of relief and she may recover also. I would pray for her health recovery my friend. Please take care of her and keep yourself strong. Love and best wishes..Ravindra

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Good Day PD. I am worried about your mother my friend. When you sit near her please try to give her courage & strength by your words. Also gently give a loving touch on her forehead. If she is in pains just put one of your bowl shaped palm on her forehead, while keeping the other (Right one) open towards sky to obtain Gods energy by Right hand & to pass on that energy through your slightly folded palm of left hand. In this way the mind of your mother would get lot of peace & comfort. To continue

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 10:13:00 AM

    can't start my day without! nothing like a good brew =)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Yes indeed a cup of coffee, a piece of toast and thou beside me on a Sunday morning. Good write here PD. God \Bless, JB PS Entered your contest with the receipes. JB :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 7:03:00 AM

    Wishing God's best for you! Take care and thanks for the blessing you are to your fellow soupers! Take care! JP

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Hi P.D. Very insteresting poem. Coffee has become a comfort and a crutch. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:39:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, PD. You ARE unstoppable

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 9:46:00 PM

    STill love this! and thanks for the contest win!

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 10:16:00 PM

    OH PD MY BFF.. I AM SAD FOR U WITH THIS DRAMA TOO.. HOPE ALL GETS RESOLVED.. START THE NEW YEAR POSITIVE ..NOT ALL THIS MESS .. FAMILY IS SO PRECIOUS AND IMPORTANT.. ROYAL IS YOUNG.. KEEP HER IN PRAYER.. THANKXX FOR UPLIFTING WORDS LUV.. RON HAS BEEN AN ACE NUMBER ONE GUY.. HE EVEN BOUGHT ME A NEW RING FOR MY PINKY TODAY TO CHASE MY BLUES AWAY..DON'T KNOW HOW I COULD DO THIS WITHOUT HIM AND GREAT FRIENDS LIKE U... LUV.. ALWAYS..BFF

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 4:01:00 PM

    Do you own a restaurant? Or are you a waitress? I like the line"taste the sunrise"a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 9:20:00 AM

    What a great way to greet the morning; first the smell then the sip ahhhhh!

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 7:45:00 PM

    coffee breaking through the mist, brings me online does insist, sometimes....bliss

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:44:00 PM

    Baked just right I'm sure, enjoyed your haiku PD. thank you for stopping by, let the sunshine travel, let me know when it reaches your heart, hugs, vie

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 8:08:00 AM

    "Somebody stop me!!!!"; is that a Jim Carey reference? If so, is it Cable Guy or Fire Marshal Bill? I love it!

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 2:21:00 PM

    Witty poem, PD. I do hope you had a merry Christmas and that things have been going well for you. Wishing you many blessings in the coming year, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 4:12:00 AM

    I think i should try one..! maybe i'll call in if i'm ever in town P D...)

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 9:24:00 PM

    I can only imbibe decaffeinated these days. I must get a pseudo-jolt from it because it tastes about the same as the one with caffeine. Good writing here.

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 7:00:00 PM

    re reading this one. It's so cool, Irma. and I am sure I entered my friend poem. I 'll try to remember to recheck!

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 6:57:00 PM

    mmmmmmmmmmm just love that first pot in the morning.. taste the sunrise..cool. I understand that; nice one PD. Merry Christmas holydays and happy new year to you also PD!

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 10:00:00 AM

    HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!! oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 11:34:00 PM

    Merry Christmas to you too : ) Love the coffee!

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 11:20:00 PM

    Is your restaurant a coffee cafe? I may have to come and sit and drink with you one day...we would have much to talk about..Maybe we could go zany and read poetry to your customers..hey, your tips would go thru the roof...we could make u a STAR!! ha ha. See, see what coffee does to me?....It's crazy this drink of mine!....I'll take decaf..you can have the pot of regular. Haiku-wise?...fun stuff, Linda. Very energizing! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 7:43:00 PM

    i am so into coffee,,,lol,,i know exactly what you mean,,great one p.d..........

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 7:16:00 PM

    Irma, of course you are on my list too. hahaha. I can only imagine how many I left off!! I don't drink coffee but I really like THIS haiku, sweetie. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 3:55:00 PM

    I was in coffee production for 30 years, still love the taste though, and this Haiku make's it even more so . a happy new year to you and your family, and thank you for your wonderful contests, and being a friend. harry

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 2:00:00 PM

    Lovely fun haiku, PD. Thanks for your sweet xmas wishes, my friend xx Yes, I had a great xmas, thanks - I hope yours was filled with happiness too

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