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What do you see

What do you see?
The world is in my eyes
Tears are in my cries
The truth is in my lies
Success in all tries
The limit in my skies
Even salt is on my fries
So when you look in my eyes
Sincere without lies
To answer the question when arise
What do you see?

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Darian. Love, Carol

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 10:31:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Darian

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 9:56:00 PM

    THis was a fun read. I found that funny, even salt is on my fries! Congrats on your win.

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:02:00 PM

    CONGRATS DARIAN ON A DYNAMIC THIRD PLACE WIN..

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:32:00 PM

    A one rhyme poem. Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 12/26/2011 5:58:00 PM

    Another lovely poem to have read today. Keep up the great work!! Always, Laura

    Brown Avatar Darian Brown Date: 1/13/2012 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks