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Desire - Haiku

her carnal desire surrendered implicitly takes my breath away

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Nice haiku !!

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 1/30/2012 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debra. I like a good haiku...very hard to beat when it falls into place :)
  1. Date: 12/21/2011 6:37:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Peter. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 12/21/2011 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol, have a wonderful Christmas and a creative new year...:)
  1. Date: 12/20/2011 11:25:00 AM

    as it should be! Wonderful haiku, Peter. Enjoyed! Merry Christmas! catie :)

    Churchley Avatar Peter Churchley Date: 12/20/2011 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Catie...a merry Christmas to you and all you love..:)