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I Will Do It With You

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I Will Do It With You

                                         A clear and starry night
                                        I have many impressions
                                    My thoughts drifts out to those
                                  Who still haven`t found their path
                                  Wanna do my best to guide them
                                   I couldn`t have made them cry
                   But of course,I would be crying with them all if they did
                                    I could not have made their path
                            But sure I could go for a walk with all of them

                                       In my deepest thoughts
                                    They have left their footprints
                                            Actions performed 
                                            Makes me curious
                                               Anger and Joy
                                    Can cause Pain or Happieness
                                               Hope and Faith
                                     Can cause Trust or Disbelive
                                   True feelings could be short lived
                         For those who wipes out their tracks behind them
                                             Sadness and Joy
                                         We all have our share

                                     I have alot of deep thoughts      
                                      Most of them not shareable
                                     But whatever you want to do
                                           I`ll do it with you
                                       It is easier said than done 
                             I`ve penned it down on a piece of paper
                                     That is the least I can do
                                       All these thoughts written
                    By the end of tomorrow,maybe we`ll have a brighter day
                                     What ever you want or need
                                             I`ll do it with you




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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:56:00 PM

    Hello Arlid, hope you are fine, Glad you found your way out of this mild addiction.... .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 4:20:00 AM

    This is another lovely piece filled with promise that I somehow missed Arild. Enjoyed your comforting write. Hope your Sunday is a relaxing one, love & hugs CTC soupmail returned :-)

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 8:14:00 AM

    Very sweet, Arild I really like this :) Love, Sarah.

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 3:18:00 PM

    Wow!! What a great read. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Thank-you for your comment on my recent work. I, find that time now seems to be moving slower. Perhaps it is just me. I do wonder where all the years have gone. I feel like I went to sleep when I was 25 and now I am 75! Have a great holiday, Jancarl.

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Aweeee...this is so sweet. Enjoyed the read !!

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 6:29:00 AM

    Inspirational this, wonderful poem. harry

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 3:31:00 PM

    so sweet, from your caring and loving heart! Merry Christmas! catie :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 3:19:00 PM

    Nice thoughts, Arild! IN fact, lovely.