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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 2:07:00 PM
    These are not so easy to write..You did a very good job with easy flow..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I have added three new photos to my blog..Sara

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 2:29:00 PM
    Antidote - lots of coffee and booze, whichever is called for at the time. A frightenly good poem. daver

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Hey Nikko, great use of repetition in this, adds to the fascination of the living nightmare you describe. Hope you have a perfect Christmas my friend! :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 5:03:00 AM
    Love YOUR ENTRY!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 5:02:00 AM
    Ding dang. Nikko. I just got done reading one of Kash's entries for Rick's contest and was blown I am being equally as thrilled with this one!! You guys are smokin' HOT! Hot HOt HOT!! No wonder NO SNOW will fall where you are!! ah ha. I want to take this time to wish you a blessed Christmas, Nikko. You have been a breath of fresh air to me this year. I pray we write more silly poems together in 2012. Glad you are OK from the wretched storm too.! With Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 11:16:00 AM
    This is excellent Nikko.and the form is challenging(to me).A sure winner.

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 4:49:00 AM
    You have a distinct ability to use and arrange wonderful words Nikko. Super good villanelle! Your poems really stands out, enjoyed reading this piece! The nightmare is reality... Dalila

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:29:00 PM
    Sounds like quite an unfortunate exsistence. Sometimes dreamland is better than reality. Fascinating work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 7:54:00 PM
    Nick, you did a great job of this contest, thanks for the beautiful write, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 10:26:00 AM
    nikks... what a "twirl" of images, rhythms and sound! makes my head spin... lagot na naman ang hika ko with spasms reading this wowie piece, lol.. glamorous ba, hahaha... sad what happened in CDO; i went there months back, horrible noh? . i stay near ortigas... miss you na... let's meet naman! eyeball... huggs!

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 9:21:00 AM
    You have done good. Thanks for a clue, I have got something smelling from your write. bl

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:50:00 AM
    Missy I love this especially your last two line and the form that you chose. You will make Andrea smile with this one.. Good luck for the contest :) *mwahugs*

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels
    Date: 12/18/2011 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    NO you're not ;)
    p.iNk Avatar binibining p.iNk
    Date: 12/18/2011 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh i am dead!! Ok super last comment... What you mean all 'K'?! Kookoo? Krazy? Kiss-o? Kink-o? Klepto? What?!!? Haha!
    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels
    Date: 12/18/2011 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    trust you to go all "K" on me ;)
  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:20:00 AM
    My dear second eyes, this is really good Poetry... very impressive my sweet... So how is life on your side of the world??? hugs across the sky to you.. Michael