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Advice for a New Sex Slave

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Advice for a New Sex Slave

Every night is the same here
As the night before
They make us drink a couple beers
Then men come in the doors
And have their choice of whores

We’re supposed to flirt and smile
Encourage their attentions to us
But when you’ve done this a while
It’s hard to sell them lust
When all you feel is disgust

If you resist, they’ll drug you
And sell you anyway
You’ll wake up broken and bruised
And sore between your legs
(Or worse, if they have sick tastes)

So try to find the nicest perv
And take him to your bed
Don’t count on those pimping jerks
To help; help yourself instead 
And choose the best prospect  -

The answer is in their eyes
Soft or warm eyes are best
If they give you chills say bye
And move on to the next set
Before their appetite’s whet

If you can’t get away
Don’t let them see your dread
Above all, don’t grovel or pray
Or even play dead (think pummeled head) -
That’s how their power is fed

Just imagine they’re someone else
Like a lover from long ago
It’s easier to take the abuse and dwell
On happiness you used to know
And keep that horseshoe of hope

If you lose hope or die, they win
So don’t make it easy for them
Pick the best guy and give him a “grin” -
It’s the only control you’ll ever get 
In a rape contest


Revised 3/6/12

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:25:00 PM
    wow! Men, can really make us feel disgusted. I'm amazed how you pulled of this poem... MEn can make one feel raped just by looking... nice to see you got a place on that list... I never passed by this contest... anyways... a great write... congrats with it...xox..pd

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:22:00 PM
    hi Susan, I'm waiting for my daughter to give me back my phone...lol..in the mean time i will read this poem... you have my attention...xox..pd

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 10:20:00 AM
    grippimg piece, susan.. best congrats on your win!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Susan congrats on your win, a very hard hitting poem, as was meant to be..David

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 2:33:00 AM
    A wonderful win congratulations Susan xx

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 8:01:00 PM
    Susan, you really thought outside of the box for this contest. Congrats on the HM. YOurs really held my attention.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 7:29:00 PM
    Oh wow!! this is chilling. Congratulations on catching the judges eye. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 7:22:00 PM
    she said you were risky. i should get you to tell my little girl the facts of life. how bout it?T.S.

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    Date: 12/22/2011 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    whats Lisa doing here ? she's such a little girl.
  1. Date: 12/17/2011 9:32:00 AM
    wow! Most go through life just not thinking but this the reality of the world. This piece is very thought envoking. Great job.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:14:00 AM
    scary piece, Susan

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 8:05:00 AM
    good morning and wow! Susan, a mighty deep poem... ouch,,, on the ending... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 11:27:00 PM
    whooo... this is bombardment of visceral images... a feature story on this topic will surely help lift social conciousness.. tops in the winning slate.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 7:14:00 PM
    HI, Again!!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 10:53:00 PM
    Susan, you really are interested in the sex slave trade. and you write about it very effectively! soupmail

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 3:09:00 PM
    * "OWWW I KNOW * TIS PATHETIC & DISGUSTING * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL SUSAN * THESE POISONS WHICH COARSE AS A RESIN AMID SORROWS UPON SORROWS * THROUGHOUT THIS EARTHS EVERY CORNER IT SEEMS * A THOUSAND WAYS TO BE RAPED * AND THE SHADOWS WHICH LINGER HAVE FOUND NEARLY EVERYONE * I LUV THE PASSION THAT REVEALS YOUR LOVING HEART AMID THIS POWERFUL PRESENTATION OF POETIC VERSE * VERY NICE THIS BITTER * YET HOLDING AN ETERNAL TOMORROW IN SWEET * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *