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LIQUID HEAVEN

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LIQUID HEAVEN

Liquid Heaven

A feast for my womanly inner beast!       
I tease, I please, you have me on my knees
I wring my hands, you oint my head
With your fingers locked in my hair of red
You, I call Master! 
You have me in a position, as if I was begging for forgiven
My words are bashing with one stuttering sound
Moaning & Moaning, 
As you make my head swirl like a merry-go-round
Craving for you to unleash your liquid heaven sound

My body speaks and mumbles a language only meant for you
A touch of intimacy, that lathers up like liquid glue
Sticky but, yet so compelling
My tongue slips silent beloved words of joy into the air
You play the master of this dark solid room
This dungeon has lighter, than one can consume
You engage me* to provoke you with everything I got
Yelling, please master don't ever stop!
At this moment I yearn for your excitement that whips out an appeal
To feel the closeness and arousing sensation of your presence
That melts me and chill me with a flow that does not kill
I'm your thinker
Your muse and poet
You are my composer creating liquid tunes
That expresses the hardness of your boldness

I confess to you my love
You are all I'm dreaming of
You drive your hands all over my body
Reaching every angle my steamy body lends
Encourage me to stimulate your mental needs
You are my master withholding a liquid element
In me you release fluids that hit like a silent tide
A desire that comes with a full force of the fire inside
I crave for the taste of your lips
Your hands on my hips
Your fingers with a tight sensual grip
I dedicate my heart, and my lust
To get lost within every push of your trust
Like a treasure deep underneath the sand
I'm addicted to the feelings you propose within your land
Your hazel eyes are my sunrise
You bring out the obsession,
And my sweet tooth temptation
Like the moon above a misty night
Seducing me in every way in a poetic write
YOU MY LOVE!!!
Your liquid heaven is like the beginning-
-Of my delicious delight!

                  by;p.d.

**A sweet Dedication To Nate**

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  1. Date: 2/22/2014 3:00:00 PM

    I love how you engage the writer as well as the pulsing body. A true masterpiece of lust and lost refrain PD. " AS YOU MAKE MY HEAD SWIRL LIKE A MERRY GO ROUND..." Awesome! J.A.B.

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:24:00 PM

    You really get into the grit of your subject and then hammer it out until you've squeezed every drop of emotion possible. WOW WOW WOW. :)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:29:00 PM

    wow- the sexiest poem I've ever read. I will have to fav this poem after I cooloff \ Finn

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Your a sexy woman. Obviously, know how to please a man. Nathan is a lucky man......................your friend rick

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Wow!... Jack

    bergundy Avatar ron bergundy Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    omg si robertson!!!!!!!!!!1
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:42:00 PM

    glad to see you in the top 100 PD

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 4:24:00 PM

    Very good, reminds me of times gone by, if you get my drift.

    bergundy Avatar ron bergundy Date: 1/31/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    omg i do shine
    shine Avatar moon shine Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I get your drift ;) wanna have a few times go by with me
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 10:46:00 PM

    what a big bang effect.I ABSOLUTELY enjoyed this.

    shine Avatar moon shine Date: 1/31/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    me and your mom are had a big bang affec
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 6:24:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and I think this poem is one of your best P.D. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 6:11:00 PM

    such good work you do.Hope you are doing well.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Smile ˜ I have arrived at the realization of one truth, and one truth alone my dear * I need Your lovin * My love, Forever, John!:) ?

     Avatar Date: 5/6/2012 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Yeap, 'That's It.'" *
  1. Date: 1/29/2012 9:52:00 AM

    soupmail!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:05:00 PM

    Ummmmmmmmmmmmm AWSOME lol that was something else PD you've really done it this time! 1200 views lmao no wonder

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 4:35:00 PM

    I haven't to poetrysoup for some time. Your work is improving, and tells of your vast imagination! Mine coming together slowly, and with Thirst For More. Thx for encouragement. Jan

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Awesome write...a million more good comments wished upon you, I just love your work.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Your use of words are amazing........I love this.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 10:43:00 PM

    Very descriptive write. No wonder you have so many reviews of this entry. I'm impressed.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 8:43:00 PM

    just stopping by to say HEY!! Enjoyed your blogs today. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 11:24:00 PM

    Your words are getting STEAMY sister! I diGG it! You are a caring person. I see you looking out for everyone! The love bounces back! Nice work here PD ...Domo ,.......~JoeY

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 9:25:00 AM

    what a lovely, emotional and sensuous dedication my dear PD..ur a beautiful poetess and I wish u all the best with Nathan Dilts...cheers!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Wow! you are some poet!. fearless and great, Gregg Banter

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 1:36:00 AM

    Awesome write, p.d.! Thank you for your kind comment on "Evening". Enjoyed the read of your poem this morning. Have a nice and inspiring day! All the best!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 8:11:00 AM

    Smile ˜ Just passing back by to say hello unto your magnificence to tell * Your Beauty * How very wonderful I believe that You Are ˜ Have a very beautiful day ˜ Dear Beautiful Linda ˜ My love to You forever, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 6:48:00 AM

    well that's one heck of a Xmas gift! Happy Seasoning ...Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 5:29:00 AM

    Hi pretty Lady...here I am never really too far...you've painted quite the picture, simply beautiful...wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a beautiful new year...luv always shannon

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 6:51:00 PM

    wow p.d. i didn't know you were such a dirty girl! lol! what a lovely nasty write!

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 2:37:00 PM

    Ps. Smile ˜ I keep thinking of your precious beauties, Liquid Heaven * Twined through time and soooo very lovely ˜ Just like You, my love, always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 9:46:00 AM

    Love the words and phrases you have thought up to put it all across, Linda,..so much of hot passion rushing out through this burst of liquid poetry, jag

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 2:15:00 PM

    Girl, I just got a boner! Kidding...but that was phreaking phenomenal...that was really good. I apologize for not responding lately. I've had zero time to be online due to the move my family and I just made to FL from SC. I should be on the Soup more often in the coming days to read and post more poetry (I have written hundreds of poems in the last few weeks but just haven't got the chance to post them). 7up

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 3:57:00 PM

    Smile ˜ This Is Simply & Perfectly, Beautiful * Just Like You! ˜ My Love Always, John!:) ˜

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