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  1. Date: 12/9/2011 9:47:00 AM

    How beautiful this is, and the perfect way to explain your name Broken Butterfly! Congrats on your poetry win.

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/10/2011 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea.
  1. Date: 12/9/2011 2:41:00 AM

    Congratulations Butterfly x

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/10/2011 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 8:56:00 PM

    Sad you broke your wings, but happy they are healing:-) Congrats on your win!

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ed.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your top placement in Michael's "What brought you to poetry" contest B Butterfly. Love, Carol

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TU Carol.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 10:43:00 AM

    I'm so glad the salve of creation has begun to heal your hurt. Perhaps someday we will see the Beautiful Butterfly emerge. Enjoy your writings BB.

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Bob.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 9:25:00 AM

    BB congratulations, i knew it as soon as i read it, well done..love David

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 8:43:00 AM

    Congrtatulations with your no. 1 tie with this beauty. Love, Joyce

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joyce.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 7:55:00 AM

    Your way and your writing took me to a place so familar... I loved how you put it to words and its a beautiful thing... xoox Michael

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Michael so much.
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 2:09:00 PM

    * "MADE ME IN HAPPINESS FOR YOUR PRICELESS BEAUTY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL BUTTERFLY * POETRY IS A WONDERFUL BLESSIND MANY LIGHTS * RELIEVING THEIR HEART IT PAINS & REJOICING WITHIN ONES LOVES * FLOATING * FLOATING * FLOATING * BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sarah.
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 1:59:00 PM

    That is truly a wonderful write BB! You did very well at writing a Ghazal! I especially like your reference to "...Broken butterfly wings..." Quite the poetic inference to you and poetry! Great Work!!

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell. This was my first ever Ghazal.
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 10:28:00 AM

    a new form of poetry for me to learn, this sincere poem would work in any form, so beautiul so profound. good luck in contest. harry

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/9/2011 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry for those nice words.
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 8:50:00 AM

    BB, you convey your emotion through poetry extremely well, good luck..David

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 12/6/2011 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David. I have never written a Ghazal before so I have no idea if I got it right or not but whatever I loved writing my poem.