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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2011 9:47:00 AM
How beautiful this is, and the perfect way to explain your name Broken Butterfly! Congrats on your poetry win.
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/10/2011 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/9/2011 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations Butterfly x
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/10/2011 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Mandy.
Ed Ebbs
Date: 12/8/2011 8:56:00 PM
Sad you broke your wings, but happy they are healing:-) Congrats on your win!
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:23:00 AM
Thank you Ed.
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/8/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement in Michael's "What brought you to poetry" contest B Butterfly. Love, Carol
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:24:00 AM
TU Carol.
Bob Quigley
Date: 12/8/2011 10:43:00 AM
I'm so glad the salve of creation has begun to heal your hurt. Perhaps someday we will see the Beautiful Butterfly emerge. Enjoy your writings BB.
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Bob.
David Williams
Date: 12/8/2011 9:25:00 AM
BB congratulations, i knew it as soon as i read it, well done..love David
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:25:00 AM
Thank you David.
Joyce Johnson
Date: 12/8/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congrtatulations with your no. 1 tie with this beauty. Love, Joyce
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/8/2011 7:55:00 AM
Your way and your writing took me to a place so familar... I loved how you put it to words and its a beautiful thing... xoox Michael
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Michael so much.
sarah seraphin
Date: 12/6/2011 2:09:00 PM
* "MADE ME IN HAPPINESS FOR YOUR PRICELESS BEAUTY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL BUTTERFLY * POETRY IS A WONDERFUL BLESSIND MANY LIGHTS * RELIEVING THEIR HEART IT PAINS & REJOICING WITHIN ONES LOVES * FLOATING * FLOATING * FLOATING * BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Sarah.
Russell Sivey
Date: 12/6/2011 1:59:00 PM
That is truly a wonderful write BB! You did very well at writing a Ghazal! I especially like your reference to "...Broken butterfly wings..." Quite the poetic inference to you and poetry! Great Work!!
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Russell. This was my first ever Ghazal.
harry horsman
Date: 12/6/2011 10:28:00 AM
a new form of poetry for me to learn, this sincere poem would work in any form, so beautiul so profound. good luck in contest. harry
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/9/2011 1:29:00 AM
Thanks Harry for those nice words.
David Williams
Date: 12/6/2011 8:50:00 AM
BB, you convey your emotion through poetry extremely well, good luck..David
Broken Butterfly
Date: 12/6/2011 10:14:00 AM
Thank you David. I have never written a Ghazal before so I have no idea if I got it right or not but whatever I loved writing my poem.