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BYU

Standing on the 'Y' mountain, our arms folded over the railing My father and I staring down at the college of my dreams Wishing, praying fervently that my dream of dreams will come true

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  1. Date: 12/8/2011 3:18:00 PM

    A nice father, daughter moment. Congrats on your HM, J. Kim

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 12:01:00 PM

    J, congrats on your win, hope your dream came true..David

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 11:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 10:04:00 AM

    Beautiful poem JD.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 9:01:00 AM

    I hope so too my friend. Good Luck and Many Blessings to you. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 10:05:00 PM

    Hey, how cool to find a BYU girl here. I graduated from there back in the 70's and now i live in PG? ARe you in my area??

    Dover Avatar J. Dover Date: 12/7/2011 8:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nah, I'm in Maryland :) That's really cool though! I'm hoping to get into BYU to become an elementary school teacher