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Emptyness

Why are we so empty in our minds and are full of joy in our hearts. What do we do when we wish for so much in life and we never get there? Where have we gone wrong and what have we lost to be so lonely, I have lost everything, except the memories that hold me down. I have nothing, but myself to see in the mirror every day I get up. Life is just another dream, which I wish was never true. It pains to feel so alone and empty from inside.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2011 3:56:00 AM

    Welcome to poetrysoup Saleem,thank you for writing in,hope to see more of your talent...keep writing!

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 4:19:00 PM

    Strong emotions and a need for more. Go meet others and connect. Start a new. Fill the void. Very well written.

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 4:18:00 PM

    Good poem Saleem,I like it. Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 3:21:00 PM

    Alot of heart in you words...If this is true, all I can say is.Leave the past in the past and don't waste another minute of life dwelling on it.Keep searching for happiness!You won't find it unless you keep looking. :-)

    durrani Avatar saleem durrani Date: 12/8/2011 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dan, for the positive approach to life.
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 1:07:00 PM

    Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Saleem. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol

    durrani Avatar saleem durrani Date: 12/8/2011 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the support, and sure looking ahead to write more.